全美綜合排名第4位
哥倫比亞大學-情況工程專業
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全數登科美國名校:
QUANMEIZONGHEDI4WEI-GELUNBIYADAXUE
QUANMEITUMUJIANGCHENGZHUANYEDI10WEI-KANAIJIMEILONGDAXUE
QUANMEITUMUJIANGCHENGZHUANYEDI20WEI-HUASHENGDUNDAXUE
QUANMEIZONGHEDI25WEI-NANJIAZHOUDAXUE
QUANMEIQINGKUANGGONGCHENGZHUANYEDI31WEI-FOLUOLIDADAXUE,QUDEJIANGXUEJIN$ 4500
硬前提:
XIANSHENG:HTONGCHUANG
HONGSHE:DONGBEIMOUDAXUE QINGKUANGGONGCHENGZHUANYE
GPA:3.8/5.0
TOEFL:96
GRE:319
軟前提:
XIANSHENGZHUANYEMINGMULVLIJIAOWEIFENGSHUO,SUODAOCHANGMINGMUJUNWEIGUODUMINGMUHUOZHONGDIANCHANGSHISHIMINGMU,HANJINLIANGGAO。DAYIFANGXUEQI:TIANXIADAXIANSHENGLIYICHUANGYEMINGMU(4RENTUANDUIZHIYI); DAERFANGXUEQI:TIANXIADAXIANSHENGLIYICHUANGYEMINGMU(ZILIQINGQIUBINGSHIXIAN);TONGSHICHASHOU:RCBBCHANGSHISHI(ZHONGQINGZHONGDIANCHANGSHISHI),BINGDAOCHANGZHUYAOKEYANMINGMU。
JIANGXIANG:SHIDAIQUDEXIAOJIYIDENGJIANGXUEJINLIANGCI,XIAOJIERDENGJIANGXUEJINYICI;SUODUDAXUESANHAOXIANSHENG;SUODUDAXUEYOULIANGXIANSHENGGANBU。
先生SWOT闡發:
Strength:XIANSHENGHONGSHEWEI211、985HONGSHE,ZHUANYEQINGKUANGGONGCHENGDUIKOU;XIANSHENGYANTAOBEIJINGFENGSHUO,QIEJUNWEIGUODUMINGMUHUOZHONGDIANCHANGSHISHIMINGMU,HANJINLIANGGAO。XIANSHENGFANGZHENMINGBAI,ZIWOSHUXIQINGXI,QIEmotivationJULIE。ZAIXIAOSHIDAIYIXIANGANZHAOBENSHENDEYANTAOLEQUYIBUBUSHENQIEJINXIU,CONGDAYIJIANGJINJUNSHIDESHICHEN,QINGQIUCHASHOUYIMINGDAERDEXUEJIEZHANGGUANQINGQIULIXIANGDETIANXIADAXIANSHENGLIYICHUANGYEMINGMU,DAODASANSHANGXUEQI,ZHANGGUANQINGQIULETIANXIADAXIANSHENGLIYICHUANGYEMINGMU,SHIDAIPENGDAOLEZHUDUOTIMUHEJIANKU。WEILESHIBENSHENJINYIBULINGHUIWEISHENGWUHEXIANGGANCHANGSHIFANGSHI,QINGQIUCHASHOULERCBBCHANGSHISHI(ZHONGQINGZHONGDIANCHANGSHISHI)MINGMU, BINGJINGYOUJINCHENGCIMINGMUDUIJILEDAPICHANGSHILVLI。HOUQIDEJINXIUHELVLIDEDUIJIWEISHUNSUIZHENGKAIBENSHENDEGUOCHUANGMINGMUDAXIAJIANGUGENBEN,JINHOUXIANSHENGZILISHIXIANMINGMUBINGQUDELEBIRANDEGONGXIAO。
Weakness:JIACHANGHENSHICHUIQINGQINGQIUHONGSHEDEPAIMING,BIAOXIANZHIJIEGUANTop30HONGSHE, BINGQIEDUIZHUANYEPAIMINGHEZONGHEPAIMINGDOUWUXIANZHI。GEIXUANXIAODAILAIHENDAJIANKU。ERXIANSHENGDEGPA,TOEFL,GRECHENGJIUQINGQIUTOP30XIEZUOLIJIAORUO。
Opportunity:GONGKENVSHENGZAIQINGQIUZHONGJUEDUIYOUSHANGFENG;BINGQIEXIANSHENGZAIQINGQIUJINCHENGZHONGNENGGOUHUOXUZHUDONGGONGTONGCANMOU,ANZHAOCANMOUZHIDIANXIXINYANTAOMEISUOQINGQIUHONGSHEDETEDIAN,YANTAOBIAODEMUDE,ZHAOCHUBENSHENYUHONGSHEDEFUHEDEDIFANG;XIANSHENGDEBAOJURENZAIQINGKUANGGONGCHENGFANCHOUJUBEIYINGXIANGLI,ZAIJIAODIANQIKANSHANGBANFALE30DUOPIANLUNWEN。
Threat:QINGQIUDE8SUOHONGSHEZHONGYOU6SUOWEIZHUANPAITop30,XIEZUOJULIE。
請求打算:
ZAIYUZANMENQIANYUEZHIQIAN,HTONGCHUANGCENGQIANYUELEBIEDEYIJIALIUXUEJIGOU,JINHOUDUIGAILIUXUEJIGOUDEWENTENGXIEZUOXIAOLIFANGMIANBUTAIDUIJING,JUEYIJIARU, QIANYUEMEIZHONG。
ZAIJIEDAOZHEGEXIANSHENGDEQINGQIU,BINGLINGHUIDAOXIANSHENGZHIQIANDELVLIHOU, WODANGJIYUXIANSHENGTINGZHILEXIANGTONG。JINGYOUJINCHENGKAIDUANXIANGTONG,WOFAMINGHTONGCHUANGGURANZHISHIBENKEXIANSHENG,QUEYIDAOCHANGLELIANGGEGUODULIYIMINGMU,BINGQIEYOUMINGBAIDEZHIYEFANGZHEN-YANTAOSHUIJINGHUAJIEZHI。XIANSHENGZHUANYEBEIJINGFENGSHUO,ZHISHIBUQINGXIYINGDANGRUOHEZHANGWOWENSHUDEZHONGDIAN, HERUOHEGENGHAODEJIANGBENSHENDEZHUANYELVLIYUXUESHULEQUJIXUESHUFANGZHENTINGZHIYOUYONGDELIANXI。
ZAILVCIXIANGTONGJINHOU,ZANMENJUEYIYIXIANSHENGMUJIERSHIGUXIANGZAODAOYANJUNJINGHUA,MENGFAGUANLISHUITIJINGHUADEDONGJIWEICHUFADIAN,JINGYOUJINCHENGYIBUBUDEJINLI,KAOJINBENSHENDEFANGZHEN,BINGJUEJIYIXIANGNULIYUSHUIJINGHUADEYANTAO。WENSHUZHONGZHONGDIANTUQIXIANSHENGDAOCHANGGUODULIYIMINGMUDELVLI,HEDAOCHANGMINGMUSHIDAIDEZILISILVCAINENGJITUANDUIXIEZUOJINGLI。
ZAICANMOUDEZHIDIANXIAXIANSHENGGONGGEICHULEBINIFENGSHUOJUTIDESUCAI,JINGYOUJINCHENGPINPINXIANGTONG,CANMOUHEXIANSHENGTONGLIGONGTONG,WENSHUXIUKANDINGGAORENWUZHENGKAIDEJIAOWEISHUNSUI,JIAODAILIANGZHOUBAIBUJIUSHIXIANLEYIQIEWENSHUDEXIEZUO。
ZAIXUANXIAOFANGMIAN,ANZHAOXIANSHENGDEBEIJINGQIANTI,ZANMENGEICHUDEZHUANYECHANGYISHI,CHONGCIZHUANPAI1-10, 11-30PINGXING,31-50BAODI。DANJIACHANGHENSHICHUIQINGHONGSHEDEPAIMING,YIXIANGKUADAZHICHOUSUANQINGQIUZHUANPAIQIAN30DEHONGSHE,BUZHENZHUO30JINHOUDEBAODIHONGSHE。GURAN,CONGXIANSHENGQIANTILAIKAN,QINGQIUZHUANPAIQIAN30DEHONGSHEZHANGWOBINIDA,DANBU30JINHOUDEHONGSHEBAODI,ZANMENRENGSHIGANJUEBUTAIWENDANG。SHIYIZAITIAOXUANBAODIHONGSHEFANGMIANTINGZHILEPINPINXIANGTONG,ZHONGJIUTIAOXUANJIANGUniversity of FloridaZUOWEIBAODIHONGSHE,BINGANZHAOXIANSHENGDEZHIYUANTONGSHIWEIXIANSHENGQINGQIULEXIANGGANGKEJIDAXUE。
HONGSHEKENDINGJINHOU,ZANMENCHANGYIXIANSHENGLIANXIMEIYIGEHONGSHEMINGMUTEDIAN,HEBENSHENDEYANTAOLEQU,XIECHUWEISHENMEYAOQINGQIUZHESUOHONGSHE,BINGJIADAOZHIQIANDEWENSHUZHONG。YOUZHENDUIXINGDEWENTENGXIEZUOGENGNENGBIAOXIANCHUXIANSHENGDUIHONGSHEDELINGHUI,YEZANZHUHONGSHELINGHUIDAOXIANSHENGYUBENXIAOMINGMUDEFUHEDEDIFANG。
HUISHOUQUANBUQINGQIUJINCHENG,HTONGCHUANGGEIWODEYINXIANGSHIJIAOJIEZHUANGDI,DANGZHENERYOUQIANSHAN。NENGGOUHUOXUQIANXUJIEGUANCANMOUDEZHIDIAN,TONGSHIYOUNENGTICHUBENSHENDESHEFATINGZHIHUISHANG。ZAIJIASHANGXIANSHENGGONGTONGDUJIAOGAO,ZAIDINGXIAOJINHOUYIGEYUENEIJIUSHIXIANLEYIQIEHONGSHEDEQINGQIU。
JINCHAOHTONGCHUANGYIQUDELECarnegie Mellon University,Unviersity of Washington, Columbia University, University of Southern CaliforniaJIUniversity of FloridaDEDENGKE,DENGKECHENGGUORENGSHIHENBUCUODE。
參謀感言:
HTONGCHUANGGEIRENDEYINXIANGSHIGUAIGUAINVYIMEI。ZAIGENJIACHANGDEGOUJINGYOUJINCHENGCHENGZHONG,LINGHUIDAOHTONGCHUANGCONGXIAOJIUXIHAONIANSHU,YISHITATONGSHIYESHIYIMEIXUEBA。YOULIANGDEZAIXIAOCHENGJIU,ZAIJIASHANGTAZAIXIAOSHIDAIDEZHUANYEMINGMULVLI,WANZHENGBIANSHIYIMINGJIANGLAIDEMINGXIAOXIANSHENG。QIANYUEJINHOU,GENQINGQIUCANMOUYESHIZHUDONGGONGTONG。ZHONGJIUSHIXIANHONGSHEDEQINGQIU,YEQUDELEHENDUIJINGDEDENGKECHENGGUO。
哥倫比亞大學簡介:
哥倫比亞大學(圖片來歷于收集)
GELUNBIYADAXUESHIYISUOZUOLUOYUNIUYUESHICHENBIANWADIDESILIYANTAOXINGDAXUE,CHANGCHUNTENGTONGMENG(Ivy League)CHENGYUANHONGSHEZHIYI。JIANLIYU1745NIAN,WEIQUANMEIHANQINGDIWUYOUCHANGJINIUYUEZHOUZUICHENJIUDEGAODANGJIAODAOJIGOU,BINGWEIJIUSUOMEIGUOFANDONGQIANJIANLIDEZHIMINDIXUEYUANZHIYI。
GELUNBIYADAXUESHIMEIYINIANYIDUDEPULICEJIANG(Pulitzer Prize)DEBANFAJIGOU,YIBAILINGYIMINGHONGSHECIKEHUOCENGDEXIANSHENGHUOJIAOZHIGONGSHINUOBEIERJIANGQUDEZHE。GELUNBIYADAXUESHIMEIGUODAXUEXIEHUI(Association of American Universities)DESHISIGEKAICHUANGHUIYUANZHIYI,BINGQIESHIMEIGUODIYIGESHOUYUYAOXUEBOSHI(M.D. degree)DEHONGSHE。
GELUNBIYADAXUEDEWENMINGXIAOYOUBAOHANWUWEIMEIGUOJIANGUOGONGCHEN,JIUWEIMEIGUOZUIGAOFAYUANFAGUAN,ERSHIWEIHUOZHUDEYIWANCAIZHU,ERSHIBAWEIAOSIKAJIANG(Academy Awards)QUDEZHE,ERSHIJIUWEILIEGUOYUANSHOU,BAOHANSANWEIMEIGUOZONGTONG。
退學請求
BENKETUIXUEQINGQIU:
1、BIYE,QIECHENGJIUYOULIANG;
2、GONGGEITUOFUCEYANCHENGJIU,CIZHONGTUOFUWANGKAOBUDIYU100FEN,HUOYASIBUDIYU7.0FEN;
3、GONGGEISAT HUOACTCHENGJIU,RUOSAT Critical ReasoningHUOWritingJUBUZAI650FENYISHANG,ZENENGGOUBUBIGONGGEITUOFUHEYASICHENGJIU。
TUIXUEQINGQIU:
1、DAXUEBIYE,QIEJUYOUBENMIXINSHIXUEWEI;
2、GONGGEICEYANCHENGJIU,CIZHONGWANGKAOBUDIYU100FEN。
QIYUQINGQIU:
GONGGEIGREHUOGMATCHENGJIU,CIZHONGGREBUDIYU1100FEN,GMATBUDIYU680FEN。